The cycle to my house was ten miles
from home . It was along distance but l loved cycling. The road was long and
winding, and in some places it was hilly. My bike was a Carrera black and green
mountain bike, it was fast and streamlined. But little did I know, later that
day I would be in for a fateful disaster. Time had passed and now l was on a
faster, straighter road. A vibrate in my pocket tickled my stomach, someone was
phoning me. Suddenly! Out of nowhere a Lordy rattled down the road.
"Argh!"
Crash...
This is a really dramatic story James! You have a few tweaks that are needed to make it even better so mumble read it to yourself to see where they are. Thank you for joining 100WC this week!
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