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Friday, 29 January 2016
Mia's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Matthew's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Matthew's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Marcus' parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Lucia's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
James' parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Henry's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Florence Jenkin's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Flora's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Flora's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Flo's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Florence Jenkin's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Anna's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
Adam's parent #100wc - '...but later that day...'
I guess not everything is as it seems! - Anna Morrison
"Bla ,bla" moaned Miss Calen. Her lessons
were so boring, any way that's what I thought but later that day I was thinking
differently...
It all happened at
lunch time when I swore I saw Miss Calen drinking her drink through her
fingers. My stomach leotard my tray crashed to the ground with a thud. My heart
skipped a beat.
"Eleanor, what are you
DOING!" Miss Calen screamed and the hairs on the back of my neck stood up.
" I thought you were a witch I
stammered,"
" I certainly am not"
" but the glass"
She went bright red. She is hiding
something...
The crash - James Johnson
The cycle to my house was ten miles
from home . It was along distance but l loved cycling. The road was long and
winding, and in some places it was hilly. My bike was a Carrera black and green
mountain bike, it was fast and streamlined. But little did I know, later that
day I would be in for a fateful disaster. Time had passed and now l was on a
faster, straighter road. A vibrate in my pocket tickled my stomach, someone was
phoning me. Suddenly! Out of nowhere a Lordy rattled down the road.
"Argh!"
Crash...
Power- Matthew Kimber
Bert stared angrily
at the group of bullies terrorising a year 3, but later that day, they would be
taught a lesson. By him.
At lunchtime, Bert
picked up his secret: a golden gauntlet, bestowed with the power of lightning,
able to destroy anything. Anything.
He strode confidently up to the bullies, with one hand
behind my back, shielding the gauntlet from their sight.
" You want
a fight? Or do you
want to give me something," one of the bullies asked, turning to face him.
"I choose the
second option," He laughed as he had revenge.
Revenge by
lightning.
...But later that day...- Marcus
...But later that
day...
I walked to town with my friends.
"Hey where we
going" I asked
No reply. So I asked
again.
"Hey where we
going"
There was still no
reply.
"Answer me"
I yelled.
All of my friends
seemed different. They all slowly turned around. My teeth were shaking like
rattle snakes. All my blood in my body rushed into my head like a slimy snake.
I was scared very scared.
I ran into a shop hoping they wouldn't
find me. Foot steps banged at the door. I was a goner, screams filled the
atmosphere. But later that day my friend were gone.
The Deep Dark Well Hero -Flo Clines 100wc
I peered down into
the deep dark well. Noises echoed up to my ears. Drip, drip, drip
!
suddenly I tripped, but a young little
boy snatched my trembling hand. The boy had blue eyes with a shade of green.
his hair was brown and bushy.
" Thank you very
much," I panted enthusiastically
" What's your
name?" He asked
" Elly," I
replied breathlessly. I continued " What's yours?"
" Ben,"
But later that day I thought what would
have happened if I fell in the deep well.
Would someone have
rescued me? Would I just stay there until I clamber up to the fresh air...
Henry White
The man lay on the
unstable wonky warehouse roof. He darted his eyes to a man carrying a crate. He
peered through his rifles scope. Bang!...The man was dead.
Later that day police
cars echoed their noise all over the place. The man still lay as stiff as a log
on the ground and blood gushed out of his four head like rapids. The killer was
no where to be seen. Where could he have gone? There wasn't even any foot steps
and the ground was four inch thick in mud. This was strange. Where was he? He
must have flown away.
But Later that day - Adam
Jack did not know
that later that day he would have the time of his life.
Jack opened the chest. Voosh!
The lid shot open
and unleashed a swirly vortex of colours that looked like a portal. The portal
was an explosion of colour, mostly shades of blue. Like the Sea.
It was hypnotising
and confusing like an optical illusion.
It seemed to be
whispering to Jack.
"Step in... Step in..." Jack
was in a trance, he leapt into the portal. The chest shut with a bang behind
him. Where was he now?
...Later that day... - Sam
Later that day I was
walking down the street and I saw a very suspicious man.
It was not sunny
outside and he was wearing woolly gloves, it was the most strangest thing I'd
ever seen. I thought. Who was he ?
What was he doing?
I said to myself
maybe he came from a cold country.
He still worried
me.
I didn't know what he
was doing until he bumped into someone on purpose. He had something in his
hand. I ran over. "What are you doing" I
exclaimed. He shrugged me of him.
"Nothing what
are you doing" he replied angrily.
I saw a wallet, in
his hand
Mia ...later that day...
I would never have known how a much a simple email
could've changed my life.
One warm
bright spring day, I got up and made my breakfast as I usually would do. However I never suspected that something
truly life changing would occur that day.
As usual I checked my phone to see that an email had arrived, from the
National Lottery. Excitement bubbled
through me, could I have won anything?
Surely not. There was still the
faintest glimmer of hope. I opened up
the email. The words took a while to run
through my mind.
I had
won! The
thirty three million pounds was mine !...
War is over - By Florence Jenkins
Lily woke up and
looked out of the window. She ran straight downstairs and
outside. A parade was going down the street and
people were cheering, laughing and hugging each other.
"War is
over!", they shouted. Lily didn't care.
All she wanted was
her dad. But later that day she did care.
When Lily was
helping her mum feed the chickens the saw a man coming towards them from over
the hill. He was tall with messy hair, he had a
sling wrapped around his left arm and his uniform was dirty.
As he came closer
Lily saw the glint in his blue eyes.
The biggest smile
crept across her face. "Dad!".
The blizzard -- Lucia
As I walked down the
snowy street it was like walking in a land
full of silver.
The sun bounced
across the snow causing a silvery glow.
"Come on
Patch" I exclaimed to my
small black and
white dog as we started to run " there's a blizzard coming!"
The wind, then
started howling. Giant flakes of snow toppled on top of
us.
When I got back home I looked behind
me. Patch was gone.
Elbowing the door
it didn't open. I sat down my eyes blurred with tears.
Later that day as I pearled out of the
window I saw patch running like mad through the dancing snowflakes, towards the
door.
He's a thief! - Jack Hyde
The man strode briskly towards his house. On the
outside he was caring, on the inside he was guilty. And evil ! His mansion was
queer and gloomy for the owner rarely
appeared.
Later that day, the man was in a stolen car driving
away from the police. Round the corner.
Straight through
the roundabout at full pelt. The police were lagging. He got away treble the
speed limit towards his disguised house.
Clambering out of
the car, the car disappeared into an underground parking lot.
The thief opened
the door. A bulky police man stood in the
doorway.
Nepal - Flora Parry
I was sat, sat having
breakfast when, clang ! Clash ! I darted out of the room into the kitchen.
Clang ! Clash ! Bang ! Pots, pans and plates smashed to the ground. Rumble,
rumble, rumble ! The ground shook more violently as it continued on. The side
of my house began to crumble. The sweltering heat blew in. I now realised.
" Earthquake!" I ran outside.
Later that day the whole house had come
down, it was in bits, well and truly crumbled. I wondered what would happen to
me. To my friends. To the richest. To the poorest. To everyone. To Nepal.
Flora Parry
Boneticore - Barnaby
I was running,
running quickly, so quickly it felt like I was running at the speed of light!
It was chasing me.
I thought it was
too late. I carried on round a corner and hid behind a well trimmed hedge.
The hideous face
popped round the corner. It's rigid back followed.
He had spikes with
poison on the top of each sticking out of his black and yellow tail, also a
sting on the tip of his tail. Boneticore had muscular arms and legs.
He sniffed then
went back round the corner. I was safe I thought but later that day
I doubted it...
William Demetriou The dog show.
Zelda, my little
Romanian dog, was fluffed up and washed for the local dog show.
I'd trained her for
weeks, jumping through hoops and running
through doggie
tunnels. Zelda had been running through Lund the
garden all morning to prepare. Later that day, it was time for the
show. Zelda excelled in every category,
(apart from waggiest tail, as she sat on it), winning rosette after rosette and
even best in show! From that day onwards, Zelda was
locally famous, getting pictures taken for the local newspaper, and the dog
show newsletter, with the headline, 'Unlikely Dog Show Winner, Zelda!'
Friday, 22 January 2016
Take off by James
Climbing the long
winding stairs towards the mountain like rocket, many mixed emotions swelled up
in my body. Beneath me was a large, hard drop. I tried not to look down but I
couldn’t resist, instantly I regretted it.
Rain poured down on
the cheering crowd, but they didn’t seem to mind. Their umbrellas made the
sparkle with many different colours. I climbed into the rocket. Take off was
immense. I took one last look at Earth. The last thing I saw was the red
explosion like fire pit. The G force was even more than I had expected.
I could hardly
breath.
“Help!”
The Strange Person by Henry White
The red rock hard mountain stood tall and strong. A lady
floated from the moon on her trusty umbrella. She delicately landed on the top
of the mountain. This was strange, who was she?
“Good day!” She greeted the walkers in a posh voice as they
stared at her “It is rude to stare!” Then she skipped of down the dusty bumpy
track. Some children giggled, what was this strange lady doing in their town?
They peered down at the town, they couldn’t believe their eyes believe their
eyes, she was bossing everyone about. They really needed to do something about
this.
Nightmare Mountain By Mia Santos Dendy
My task was to scale
up this enormous mountain, in a little valley. It would be tough, and I knew
that only too well. I took my first grip on the side of the mountain and
fumbled around for somewhere to put my feet. I managed to get about five metres
up when I felt something slash my arm. Cautiously I rolled up my sleeve to
inspect the damage, a red angry cut glared at me, blood oozed from the cut.
What could I do
now? I now wished I had brought an umbrella and I could floated gracefully back
down to reality. Reality…
RED, HARD, MOUNTAIN, FLOATED, UMBRELLA - Marcus
The red umbrella floated. Swaying
towards the hard rock. I thought the umbrella would crash into the rocks. The
red umbrella didn’t. It went over the rocky mountain. I ran after it losing my
breathe. I lost sight of it.
Till then. Something sparkled in
the sunlight. I thought it was my umbrella it wasn’t. It was a beautiful view
of sheep, cows. MOUNTAIN LIONS! I ran for my life hoping they didn’t see me.
They just growled like cats it was a magnificent view so beautiful and
dangerous. I should of ran but it was too beautiful.
THE END
Climbing - Matthew Kimber
Jutting out the red hills, the mountain dominated everything
around it, as intimidating as a monster. I stared at the hard rough surface
wonderingly. How was I to get to the
top?
I climbed the first 10 metres with ease, but I got stuck. I
knew what to afterwards, but what right now? Suddenly I noticed a single
handhold nearby. I grabbed at it;
couldn’t reach.
I had to jump.
I braced myself, and leaped. Just, I grabbed it and pulled
myself up, ready to carry on.
Three hours of hard work later, I reached the top of the
mountain. Laughing, I took my umbrella and floated down.
“Whee!”
Sometimes relaxing doesn’t last long. - By Anna.
“Come on,
Ellie!” Amber moaned
“I’m
coming!” I yelled back.
“Quickly,
dear,” my mother tried to prompt me out of my room as I was doing my boot lace.
She really annoys sometimes. My mum was finding it quite difficult as my baby
brother Daniel was in one arm and trying to grab my rainbow umbrella but I
yanked it away. I charged down stairs.
I saw the
gleaming sun reflecting on the mountains dying them an orangey red. Just as we
were settled. Daniel crawled out onto the patio and tried to eat a pebble. He’s
hard work. All our relaxation floated away as Daniel shoved pebble down his
throat.
The Mountain by Samuel Newby.
Wandering up the foggy mountain my umbrella had holes
splattered by the rain. The rain was bulleting down endlessly. Rocks floated
down the river. The path was leading me to the top “I hoped,” I said nervously.
As I walked up I saw a red rock with funny writing on it.
“Would this lead me to the top” I asked myself. Rocks the
size of boulders rolled down at an enormous speed breaking anything in its way!
I dived for cover. Bang! Something had happened but I didn’t want to look.
The One and Only by Jack Hyde
The hard, red
umbrella looked massively out of place for the rest of the bustling town
carried a white umbrella. A bird’s eye view would have looked like the Japanese
flag. The cloudlike mountains were standing tall and proud like an elegant bar
graph. There was a miniature mountain which by far was out of place. Floating
upwards into the mountain like clouds Balloons floated upwards all blue except
one, yellow, out of place. Up in the atmosphere, all the planets aligned apart
from one out of place. Next door a music practice all perfect except one, not
out of place the only one correct.
Help - By Flora Parry
“Help!” I cried as I tumbled down the red mountain. Blood
poured out of my left arm. I had been hiking when a storm blew over me, the
wind had thrown me over. I was grasping my umbrella, the hard handle mixed with
my cold hands caused my lower arm to be utter pain. I fell further and further,
I glanced down. Water, deep water. I slowly, cramped with pain and nerves
pushed the trigger on my umbrella, would my plan work? Splash! I slowly floated
towards the banks of the pond into the lush green reeds. I clambered out.
The Golden Tower - By Flo Clines
Looking down from the tower, I saw clouds, clouds that
floated through the clear light blue, shimmering sky like umbrellas. Staring at
a far distance I could finally make out the big tall figure.
Could it really be?
A red mountain stood still on a hard rocky surface. Blazing
purple flowers covered the grass, making a summery scene.
“ Look at the red twinkling mountain” I exclaimed
The bright
yellowy sun placed a glowing shadow of the gold tower. My view was so
colourful, my mind exploded with rainbows painting a picture in my mind of the
red twinkling mountain.
By Flo Clines
The Lucky Umbrella - By Lucia Schanz
The Lucky Umbrella
Then hard rocky, red mountain towered above me. “How do we
get to the top?” asked Jerry who was crouched next to me.
“By using those very
obvious stairs over there” I grinned, pointing out the stairs to Jerry. His
face went bright red like a strawberry.
We started to
climb the horrifyingly extensive staircase leading up the mountain. 155, 116,
118. Then, as I hopped onto the following step it started to disintegrate. Then
it broke. I was falling. Fumbling around I grabbed my bright pink umbrella, and
started to float to the ground. Looking up, I saw Jerry’s terrified face. But
what was he terrified by? Me falling, or the colour of my umbrella.
Adam Nutbeem - The Mountain
I gasped in shock as I floated over the hard mountain on my
red umbrella. The view was amazing! I
could hear the cry of a wolf in the distance and feel the cool breeze on my
face. The top of the mountain was coated
with snow like icing on a cake.
“Wow!” I exclaimed. What an incredible sight! The whole range of mountains stretched out of
my sight. This was the most incredible
thing I had seen in my life. Bang! My eyes opened at the noise to discover. It was just dream!
Barnaby - The Mountain
We rushed towards the top of the mountain through snow and
rain, we couldn’t stop now or else we would drown! With floods making the water
rise there was no chance, but there was one way, climb the mountain. All we
could see was water. Also a rogue umbrella that floated across the water.
Would we survive?
Would we get to the top of the mountain in time? We ran up the mountain when my
friend cut his leg on a hard rock, red blood oozed out of his leg! He felt weak
in his leg, he couldn’t climb anymore!
A Relaxing Day. By William Demetriou
Rays of sun shone down onto a mountain of golden sand. It
was a relaxing day, and a red cocktail umbrella floated up and down in my pink
lemonade. People were trying really hard
to avoid the pebbles and still get down to the deep, cyan blue sea, but almost
everyone failed. Children ran up and
down the beach, carelessly knocking over sandcastles, while screaming and
laughing. People were constantly getting
splashed by the spray of the sea (and their wet dogs.) The older people were sunbathing on fold-out
chairs underneath colourful parasols.
Everybody had a great time, but finally, the day ended, and the sun had
set.
Florence Jenkins - Alone in an avalanche
I looked down from the mountain. The red umbrella floated
past. I headed down to the murky water below. It was almost completely covered
with shining ice. The umbrella was finding its own way through the hard water.
Inquisitively I reached out and touched the red plastic. That’s when it all
went wrong.
Suddenly I heard a terrifying rumble. The mountain shook so
violently I felt like I was in a volcano whilst it was erupting. The snow
tumbled down the abrupt face of the mountain. I ran, in panic as fast as my
legs could carry me. “Help me!” I yelled. I was alone. Alone in an avalanche.
Friday, 8 January 2016
Jack Hyde
They worked hard
through the night. Keeping their mouths shut, trying not
to get the poison in their mouths. The heat was making their sticky clothes
form against their sweaty bodies.
A mysterious man
clambered out of the poisonous mass. He didn't speak their language but he kept
repeating a word which somehow was sounding like this 'aglobongaco'. The workers, which
were hidden, thought it was a name.
A gelatinous object
fell out of his pocket. An eyeball popped out of the object!
The man started placing trinitrotoluene on the object, the object cloned
itself.
Florence Jenkins
I stare at the
cupcake in the window. The brown flake looks like a little train coming out of
a tunnel. The smooth, creamy icing swirls over the flake making the tunnel.
There are two men waving sticks. I imagined them to be telling the train to
stop so it didn't go over the edge. I wish someone had done that to me. Told me
to stop before I ran over the edge. I as soon as I
ran over the edge
my whole life fell apart. I lost my home, my parents and my best friend. My
only friend.
Barnaby Tripp
It was one ordinary
day at the chocolate factory, the chocolate bars were being made with care. But
suddenly the chocolate stopped pouring into their moulding trays. There was no
chocolate left!
They had run out of cocoa beans to make chocolate
with. Imagine all the devastated people! The company had to get some more
beans. The manager of the company flew straight to the cocoa bean farm to see
what was going on! A hurricane called Adam had hit the area! It had nocked all
the cocoa beans of their trees and onto the floor, where then they were to be
eaten by birds swooping down to have a few pecks at a time. This made the food
uneatable! There was no chocolate left!
James Johnson
Two tiny, mysterious
builders were climbing a cup cake. These builders were one of a kind. The cup
cake was a chocolate cake with vanilla icing and on to played some marsh
mellows and a flake. The two tiny builders started to climb, the cup cake was
like a gigantic mountain to them. Finally, they reached the top and scrambled
to the flake. The two builders' stomachs were fiercely grumbling. The flake was
a the very least, four times bigger than both of them put together. Swiftly,
the two tiny builders banged and banged at the flake until it crumbled . Only
now they new it wasn't a good idea...
Florence Clines
The mine was cold and dark, Fred was holding a hammer to
brake the little building .Billy was holding a candle to see where they are
going.
"Oh we can knock it in the whole""
The hammer smashed into the rotting building, it crumbled
down into the big stinky hole.Dust flew out of the hole,covering the people
with dust.
"Cough cough"they choked
Billy waved the candle around to see where Fred had gone.
He was no where to be seen.
"Help help" came an old voice
Fred was under the building.
Flora Parry - The Dream
Alice was sleeping, dreaming of ponies and horses. She
had wanted a pony for ages, grey and white called Mojo or Lucky. Thinking of
galloping along a bridle way, when something new popped into her head, it was
blurred, so blurred only a brown twig
could be made out.
Soon she could see some white snow, with the twig on top, next some balls of
fluff or feathers appeared just sitting on the snow. A red building was now in
sight snow, twig and fluff balls all on top, painters now appeared seeming to be
painting the fluff balls. Alice realised. It was a cupcake.
Matthew Kimber
The two men are spies
from the creators of chocolate flakes.
The company
accidentally made a batch of these chocolate sundae toppings with no colour,
and their job is to cover them in their special chocolate paste before they are
eaten by unsuspecting children who, not noticing the slight visibility, may
choke then needing the ambulance.
If they fail, the
public will confuse itself because of these 'flakes with no colour'', driving
the world into chaos, with rumours of a secret company.
Lucia Schanz
The room they were
standing in was small, there was a bed in one corner of the room . In line with
the bed was a table, on the table was a brown bag. The two men slowly opened
the bag and saw what they were looking for. It was filled with thousands of ting
gold coins. Grabbing the bag they jumped out of the open window. Then the alarm
sounded.
Dashing
through the streets the two men ran as fast as they could, the distant wails of
police sirens chilling their bones. They needed to hide. Then they saw flake,
it was hollow. "In there", shouted the first man and the scrambled
into the hole.
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